reader response draft 3

Reader response Draft 3

Emm(2014) states in “ The Perils of Over-sharing in Social Networks” that there are increasing threats regarding sharing information online. This is due to the government and network service providers having access to important information. The author also believes that people are increasingly dependent on the internet. This causes users to reveal too much about about our daily lives and leaves users, and the people the users work for, vulnerable to online threats. Emm(2014) also states that the dangers of over-sharing is easily over-looked, as handheld devices ,people frequently use, are not common targets for hackers. Such devices will create a fake sense of security that could jeopardise user’s information.

Because the internet and social media has become an inseparable part of our lives, People are now exposed to more dangers online than ever before, not only on a physical level but also on a spiritual level.

It is evident that there are increasing number of people who are using the social media. Facebook, Twitter and Instagram, are common terms used today. There are also more and more people who reveal too much about themselves. Users might be unaware that posting such information, which may originally seem like a harmless activity, brings about dangers as mentioned by the author. One might also be unaware of the steps they could take to prevent such dangers. Such action includes precautionary measures like adjusting their privacy settings and selecting who can get access to their private information. Educating people of such features should be a necessary step taken by social media platforms to reduce the danger of leaking too much information about both the users and the organisation such people are working for.

The social media and technology are undeniably accessible to a younger audience. Users may only be an eight-year old but may already own a phone and have access to the internet. Users may also not be mature enough to judge whether their action online are detrimental to their online safety. They may also be uneducated in the fields of cyber-crimes and safety. This may lead to viruses attack or even leakage of knowledge about the location of their families and themselves. Educating the the future generation should be made a priority in schools, especially when our lives are so closely linked to the internet and technology. Learning techniques of keeping themselves safe from the dangers of over-sharing will eventually be a habit common in society. This will ultimately deter people from using the internet a vulnerable source of information.

On a more emotional level, the internet and the social media could potentially damage the user’s self-esteem and even lead to antisocial behaviour. Online netizens will inevitably compare themself to the pictures of acquaintance on the social media and the situation is made worse when such people overshare on such platforms. Success is determined by the number of ‘likes’ you get on the social media platforms.  All these is definitely unfavourable, or even damaging, for the development of the user’s self-esteem and spiritual self.  Ellis, (2014) states “When social media replaces or distracts from personal interactions it is decidedly anti-social”. She even joked that one day, people will text our acquaintance even when he or she is right beside the user.

(581 words)
David Emm(2014, 21 March), The Peril of Over-sharing in Social Networks [Web log post]
Retrieved from :
http://www.huffingtonpost.co.uk/david-emm/the-perils-of-over-sharing-in-social-networks_b_5005276.html

Debra Ellis(n.d), Does the social media affect anti-social behaviour
Retrieved from:
http://multichannelmagic.com/03/does-social-media-encourage-anti-social-behavior/

Reader response draft 2

Emm(2014) states in “ The Perils of Over-sharing in Social Networks” that there are increasing threats regarding sharing information online. This is due to the government and network service providers having access to important information. The author also believes that people are increasingly dependent on the internet. This causes us to reveal too much about about our daily lives and leaves us, and the people we work for, vulnerable to online threats. Emm(2014) also states that the dangers of over-sharing is easily over-looked, as handheld devices ,we frequently use, are not common targets for hackers. Such devices will create a fake sense of security that could jeopardise our information.

I agree with the author that the internet and social media has become an inseparable part of our lives. We are now exposed to more dangers online than ever before, not only on a physical level but also on a spiritual level.

It is evident that there are more people who are using the social media. Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, are common terms used today. There are also more and more people who reveal too much about themselves. One might be unaware that posting such information, which may originally seem like a harmless activity, bring about dangers as mentioned by the author. One might also be unaware of the steps they could take to prevent such dangers. Such action includes precautionary measures like adjusting their privacy settings and selecting who can get access to their private information. Educating people of such features should be a necessary step taken by social media platforms to reduce the danger of leaking too much information about both the users and the organisation such people are working for.

The social media and technology are undeniably accessible to a younger audience. One may only be eight-year old but may already own a phone and have access to the internet. One may also not be mature enough to judge whether their action online are detrimental to their online safety. They may also be uneducated in the fields of cyber-crimes and safety leading to viruses attack or even leak knowledge about the location of their families and themselves. Educating the the future generation should be made a priority in schools, especially when our lives are so closely link to the internet and technology. Learning techniques of keeping themselves safe from the dangers of over-sharing will eventually be a habit common in society. This will ultimately deter people from using the internet a vulnerable source of information.

On a more spiritual level, the internet and the social media could potentially damage one’s self esteem and even lead to antisocial behavior . One will inevitably compare oneself to the pictures of acquaintance on the social media and the situation is made worse when such people overshare on such platforms. Success is determined by the number of ‘likes’ you get on the social media platforms.  All these is definitely unfavourable ,or even damaging, for the development of one’s self esteem and spiritual self.  Ellis, (2014) states “When social media replaces or distracts from personal interactions it is decidedly anti-social”. She even joked that one day, we will text our acquaintance even when he or she is right beside us.

(534 words)

David Emm(2014, 21 March), The Peril of Over-sharing in Social Networks [Web log post]

Retrieved from :

http://www.huffingtonpost.co.uk/david-emm/the-perils-of-over-sharing-in-social-networks_b_5005276.html

Debra Ellis(n.d), Does the social media affect anti-social behaviour

Retrieved from:

http://multichannelmagic.com/03/does-social-media-encourage-anti-social-behavior/

Reader response Draft 1

Emm(2014) states in “ The Perils of Over-sharing in Social Networks” that there are increasing threats regarding sharing information online. This is due to the government and network service providers having access to important information. The author also believes that people are increasingly dependent on the internet. This causes us to reveal too much about about our daily lives and leaves us, and the people we work for, vulnerable to online threats. Emm(2014) also states that the dangers of over-sharing is easily over-looked, as handheld devices ,we frequently use, are not common targets for hackers. Hence, they provide a fake sense of security that could jeopardise our information.

I agree with the author that the internet and social media has become an inseparable part of our lives. Hence we are exposed to more dangers online than ever before.

Firstly, it is evident that there are more people who are using the social media. Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, are common terms used today.There are also more and more people who reveal too much about themselves. These people might be unaware that posting such information, which may originally seem like an harmless activity, bring about dangers as mentioned by the author. People might also be unaware of the steps they could take to prevent such dangers. Such action includes adjusting their privacy settings and to event select who get access to their private information. Educating people of such features should be a necessary step taken by social media platforms to reduce the danger of leaking too much information about both the users and the organisation such people are working for.

Secondly, social media and technology are currently accessible to a younger audience. An eight-year old may already own a phone and have access to the internet. Such people might not be mature enough to judge whether their action online are detrimental to their online safety. They may also be uneducated in the fields of cyber-crimes and safety leading to viruses attack or even leak knowledge about the location of their families and themselves. Educating the the future generation should be made a priority in schools, especially when our lives are so closely link to the internet and technology. Learning techniques of keeping themselves save from the dangers of over-sharing will eventually be a habit common in society. This will ultimately deter people from using the internet a vulnerable source of information.

Thirdly, we have become more and more dependent on the internet. Not many people today would feel comfortable if their handheld devices are not within an arm's reach. Our devices has become a tool that contains all of our information such as password and bank account transactions. Losing it would reveal such power information to people with malicious intends.

(457 words)

David Emm(2014, 21 March), The Peril of Over-sharing in Social Networks [Web log post]

Retrieved from :

http://www.huffingtonpost.co.uk/david-emm/the-perils-of-over-sharing-in-social-networks_b_5005276.html

Summary

Emm(2014) mentioned in “ The Perils of Over-sharing in Social Networks” that there are increasing threats regarding sharing information online. This is due to the government and network service providers having access to important information. The author also believes that people are increasingly dependent on the internet. This causes us to reveal too much about about our daily lives and leaves us, and the people we work for, vulnerable to online threats. Emm(2014) also states that the dangers of over-sharing is easily over-looked, as handheld devices ,we frequently use, are not common targets for hackers. Hence, they provide a fake sense of security that could jeopardise our information. (107 words)

Reference

David Emm(2014, 21 March), The Peril of Over-sharing in Social Networks [Web log post]

Retrieved from :

http://www.huffingtonpost.co.uk/david-emm/the-perils-of-over-sharing-in-social-networks_b_5005276.html